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Great painting; full of a multitude of tones; nice direct eye contact between the king of the forest and the wandering human. Very nice...


OMG> With abstract brush strokes and loads of squarish blocks of colour, the composition of this traffic scene is super unique, bold, b...

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Great painting; full of a multitude of tones;
nice direct eye contact between the king of the forest and the wandering human.

Very nice lighting effects, and mixing of tones/ colours and details;

HOWEVER: you didn't get 5/5 because the king can still be displayed grander :) and made the human a little less visible;

Make the king of the jungle almost intimidating as calm an animal as he is;

Where that king steps, the earth should change :D Something identifying that one as the king,

Ground details/ plant details are all perfect, and letting the king stand out, but you can definitely up the Ante of being in the presence of this magnificent King:)

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OMG> With abstract brush strokes and loads of squarish blocks of colour, the composition of this traffic scene is super unique, bold, bright and colourful. The contrasts of the bright roads and the dark night above is also really stunning,

IF you have to look critically for mistakes. the lights on the trees, can be a bit bright, for a lamp post. and the light above it is red, and then the light in the trees makes it look like it's a stadium's lights shining through the leaves.

The amount of colours used are also really wow,, the glistening of the roads, the way the scene is laid out, is beyond stunning. It feels like the streets are alive, and the cars are behaving like humans within a system.

All the different elements come together, also looks a bit like a season is changing, with the elements in the air/ leaves from the trees being distributed through to the world.

Love it ∞ ♥

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kuzy62 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the watch!!!!
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Mythiril Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
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Thank you kindly for the watch. I hope you'll keep enjoying my work as long as I keep on terrorizing dA :giggle:
btw, you're an awesome person. Have a great day :heart:
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cricketumpire Featured By Owner Edited May 31, 2017  Hobbyist Photographer
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      *Free Icon/Emote* Thank You Pusheen    ... thanks for doing just that with my grey cat portrait Darryn     :) (Smile)

      ...and the owl submission as well      :owlnoid:     Please do keep on watching???
        
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skulkey Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
thanks for the watch! :)
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Undead-Academy Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for adding me to your watch list :)
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heavenriver Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the watch!
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DsyneGrafix Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank You Very Much for the Watch!!
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3wyl Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
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marijeberting Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017
Thanks fro the watch :) (Smile) 
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